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Not So Loving Mother of Mine by ~TaintedTulip:iconTaintedTulip:



Mothers love you
Mothers cherish you
Mothers hold you when you cry

Mothers teach you
Mothers guide you
Mothers make you who you are

Mothers calm you
Mothers soothe you
Mothers wipe away your tears

Mothers guard you
Mothers protect you
Mothers chase away your fears

Mothers love you
They support you
Never hurt you or make you cry

So thanks for fucking nothing
Not so loving
Mother of mine
©2007-2010 ~TaintedTulip
:icontaintedtulip:

Author's Comments

I came up with the first and last stanza in the shower this morning without really meaning to, so sat down and wrote the rest.

Took me only 5 minutes, so undoubtedly I will hate it in a few months and completely rewrite it.

For now though, it feels utterly finished.

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:iconspunkonastick:
I can relate...

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:iconlegna69:
u don't wanna c my mother..

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:iconneko-priestess:
I like this, it's like my mother!
*smiles n hugs*
:+fav:

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:iconmycrimsonsuicide666:
<3 Absolutely amazing. :+fav:

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:icontaintedtulip:
Thank you! And thanks for the fave!!!

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